Swimming

As I swam the water splashed like a hurricane sinking me to the bottom then another swimmer hurting at me. Finally I reached the end of the pool I felt like I was in space running out of oxygen. As just I was starting to relax I remembered that I had to swim another lap I felt like my arms were being ripped straight of. I tried to teleport my mind to a whole new world and as I reached the end my  mind  just floated away.

Then as I climbed out of the pool my togs were forcing me down to the ground. I felt like I was carrying a two ton elephant.

Then we got on the bus as the bus moved I could hear the loud roar of the engine. What I thought was hour I was on the bus it was only a several minutes.

I totally agree that living in the desert is better than living by the sea and here are the reasons why. It’s quiet you can do whatever you want and you can have all the peace you want.

First listen can you hear a sound? No, see that is why. Living in the desert is better than living by the sea you won’t even hear a sound when you’re living in the desert unlike all of the splashing waves.

Secondly do you get bothered by someone that you know and want to get away from them? Then, the desert is the place to go. There is no one for kilometres and you can have the peace and quiet you always dreamed of.

Have you ever been sick of rules and laws you have to follow? Well in the desert you won’t have to listen to any rules or laws at all. There are no parents, teachers and no police to tell you that you that you’re driving faster than the speed limit.

So how do you feel about living in the desert rather than the sea? At the sea you can hear the splashing sound of waves, you could be bothered by the people because they could follow you to the beach and there are laws and rules at the beach so do you like the desert or the sea more. I choose the desert and so should you !

Enlagement

Have you ever wondered about something that you have already done or something that do you need to do more? If you’re thinking about homework then you’re on the right track. If you’re not then I’m sure you’ll find your way. I mean why do you need to do homework if you’ve already done enough at school?  When we get home we need to relax take a break. That is why it’s called after school, but homework takes it all away.

Firstly I’ll tell you about the bad things that homework has. The first thing is that homework creates stress since a lot of student do their homework at the final day. They are desperate to finish their homework on time and struggle with their work so they get more stressed each time they get homework and start to cheat and copy off each other.

Secondly they’ll start to fall asleep in class because of the homework they are given and they need to finish. It’ll take them hours to finish it all and when they’re finished the time will be late.

Thirdly it takes away time with family and friends which is important to a growing child.

just imagine that homework is just extra work that adults do for their jobs. They’re too busy to finish it all and just like kids they get stressed and tired and they might just fall asleep.

Lastly kids need to play as they already have been at school for six hours spelling, writing, reading, and doing math and after all that you’ll be tired and sleepy.

Ok now for the good things about homework. Firstly it helps the person to remember what they have learned today like times table, spelling words and their topic. These are all the thing that homework helps you with.

Secondly it also help the students to work independently so they don’t always wander off to ask someone to help them and that means that they can work faster alone without the help of anyone.

The third thing which is that they review what they had learned in class to remind them what the method is in a math question or how to remember the easiest way to spelling a word and practice helps to answer just like it was just like a basic fact.

Lastly it also helps you throughout your life like if you would want to find the perimeter of a piece of land or find the area.

So what do you think about homework should it be banned? Or should you do it everyday? You choose it’s your decision.  

The dark forest

Before

Come to my silent forest, you’ll love the peace and cool colors.

After

Come to my forest you’ll love the peace and cool colors. You can feel the silence creeping up to you and the darkness covering your eyes, as fear fills your head like air flowing through you,then the cold breeze blows you away. 
The lifeless trees have branches as sharp as needles but as soon as you start to run you notice you're lost.
Edited by Patrick

                 

The desert

As I open my eyes I’m getting pulled down by killer quicksand.

                                                                                                                                                      The frightening sight of a raging wave of snakes moving toward me gave me the creeps.                                                     

                                                                                                                                                     The painful feeling of spikes on cactus stabbing thought my skin and into my flesh left me bleeding painfully.

The deafening sound of snakes hissing like chaotic, crazy wild animals.

As I fall to the ground I feel the boiling sand I feel like I’m in a steaming oven.

As I look at the horizon I see the sun set and I was full of relief.

The lack of water makes me feel like I’m in the middle of a draught.

As I walk I feel like a part of my body turns to ashes because of the raging, fiery Sun.

As I look I see trees turning into flames bushes turning into nothing but ashes.

Looking in the distance I see a bus, could it be but it was just my mind playing tricks.

The taste of sand clogs my mouth blocking my breathing.

The wind was blowing I smelt

The wet lands

The Wetlands

My eyes glared at the crocodile swimming around like a floating log.
The smell of the slime that covered the water and the coats of bark on trees.
The feeling of the mud opening its mouth and swallowing my feet and I couldn't get free.
The horrible taste of the water as I accidentally fall in and the water charges into my mouth and forcing me to swallow.
My nose smell fresh and disgusting air of the wetland and as disgusting as the rubbish dump and fresh as flowers.
The sound of birds chirping, the wind howling into my ear and the leaves are dancing about.